no1. Feedback was: there weren't enough flashbacks to the parts with Bradley and Lorena. There isn't enough performance, there should be more close ups of the artists, more intertextual references such as 'The Grudge' when Lorena is stalking Bradley. Positive comments was that the story is clear and the editing is effective.
no2. We decided that we need to film more footage so Heather is going to book the camera today so that we can film this weekend. Filming will include locations like the theatre. Heather is going to book the theatre with Mr Hitchenson for Saturday from 10-2. Another location will be Bradley's house so we can get footage of Lorena going in through the window.
no3. Editing will take place on Monday and Lorena and Bradley will be in charge of this.
no4. Siham has selected images for the ancillary text and is going to post them to the blog. Bradley has designed the pages so Lorena just needs to edit the images for the 1st draft to be complete.